Behind The Shadows: Evaluation Screening

What was liked:

Music suited it well.
Good effects.
Well paced.
The shot in the mirror.
The different shots at the end of the pen clicking.
Good use of body horror.
Good use of shots.
Doesn't give too much away.
Good use of camera angles.
Good use of close ups at the start.

What still needs to be improved:

Fix the mirror scene.
Shorter smile shot.
Missing production text.
More sound effects.
Some shots could be edited together a little better.
Some dialogue to help narration and the storyline.
Dialogue could not be heard.
Contrast too bright.
Something jumpy could be added.
Soundtrack seems repetitive.
Ending needs something scarier.

Score given:

6 (2)
7 (5)
8 (2)